DARK MAGE
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DARK MAGE
So, anyone like comics?
You know (I think)...
NARUTO, BLEACH, FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST, +ANIMA, SHAMAN KING, ONE PIECE, MAR, LUCKY STAR, etc.
As a matter of fact, I'm makig my own. DARK MAGE. It follows the story of 16-year-old boy, Rihoko, and his journey to become the worlds new Dark Mage. Rihoko's past has been shrouded in mystery, and his only rememberance is when he was only 5 years old, and was an orphan after his mother mysteriously died... Dark Magus (The Dark Mage Master who was the previous Dark Mage) Yakushi takes Rihoko under his wing, and pushes him to his limit to become the next Dark Mage; and become the very best. After years of trainning, Rihoko must set out on a quest... One day, a boy named Chris who has a strange connection to Rihoko, bursts into Rihoko and Yakushi's calm house in the woods, and fights Rihoko. Chris tests Rihokos abilities, and collects a blood sample for his leader. Rihoko must rise up, and defeat the growing threat to humanity using not light, but darkness, and stop Dark Lord Hisayuki from destroying the world through the prophisiesed dark abyss from which sends oblivian towards anything. Other characters include: Tyler Adams, Tia Kimati, Allen Adams, and more. So, what do you think? Also read the character bio and the quiz to discover which Dark Mage character you are in the quiz section! Let me know if you have any character ideas! PM me!
You know (I think)...
NARUTO, BLEACH, FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST, +ANIMA, SHAMAN KING, ONE PIECE, MAR, LUCKY STAR, etc.
As a matter of fact, I'm makig my own. DARK MAGE. It follows the story of 16-year-old boy, Rihoko, and his journey to become the worlds new Dark Mage. Rihoko's past has been shrouded in mystery, and his only rememberance is when he was only 5 years old, and was an orphan after his mother mysteriously died... Dark Magus (The Dark Mage Master who was the previous Dark Mage) Yakushi takes Rihoko under his wing, and pushes him to his limit to become the next Dark Mage; and become the very best. After years of trainning, Rihoko must set out on a quest... One day, a boy named Chris who has a strange connection to Rihoko, bursts into Rihoko and Yakushi's calm house in the woods, and fights Rihoko. Chris tests Rihokos abilities, and collects a blood sample for his leader. Rihoko must rise up, and defeat the growing threat to humanity using not light, but darkness, and stop Dark Lord Hisayuki from destroying the world through the prophisiesed dark abyss from which sends oblivian towards anything. Other characters include: Tyler Adams, Tia Kimati, Allen Adams, and more. So, what do you think? Also read the character bio and the quiz to discover which Dark Mage character you are in the quiz section! Let me know if you have any character ideas! PM me!
Last edited by JoeyGGM27 on Tue Jun 30 2009, 03:06; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : To make Bobby's frickin' puppy eyes stop.)
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I love your comic! Your plot line is a lot better than any ones I've ever seen from people at school who try to draw.
Good luck with your comic!
Good luck with your comic!
Dark Mage chapters 4-7 summary
Thanks! Here's a comic update everybody!
As Rihoko, Yakushi, and Tyler set out to intensify Rihoko's training, they
run into a Water Dragon as they kayak across "Misty Lake" (cheesy
name...). After much strife, Tyler shows his skills. He can run on water,
deteach the blade of his scythe and unleash fire from the hinges, and can
chop the arm off a sixty foot dragon. The dragon proves too powerful for
the group, and Tia and her sister Luna save them. As the sixth chapter
opens, Rihoko and his new "aquaintinces" have some quality bonding time.
In the form of dissing. In the end of the chapter, a book showing Rihoko
closes, and a young woman grins devilishly. She seems to know Yakushi
and Rihoko. She seems to be out to kill them both! 10 days later, Rihoko
and friends are enjoying violent collisuem matches (and seeing as she is a
tomboy, Tia is going crazy for the violence...). As a new match begins,
the assassin woman from chapter six appears in a match! Her name is
Aria, and she apparently isn't there for fun... As she begins her match
against a much larger and buff foe, she isn't the slightest bit nervous. The
match begins, and Aria seems to avoid attacks with much ease. Annoyed,
she says "This is becoming a nuisance. You are very pathetic. I'll end this
quickly for you...". As her large opponent swings his towering fists at her,
Aria disappears and reappears to the mans side, and back hands him into
the wall. Disobeying the rules, she ends up killing the man with a single
blow! As the autoritys come to arrest her, she stabs them all, knocks
them unconscious, and disappears... What will follow Rihoko and the group after this? To Be Continued...
As Rihoko, Yakushi, and Tyler set out to intensify Rihoko's training, they
run into a Water Dragon as they kayak across "Misty Lake" (cheesy
name...). After much strife, Tyler shows his skills. He can run on water,
deteach the blade of his scythe and unleash fire from the hinges, and can
chop the arm off a sixty foot dragon. The dragon proves too powerful for
the group, and Tia and her sister Luna save them. As the sixth chapter
opens, Rihoko and his new "aquaintinces" have some quality bonding time.
In the form of dissing. In the end of the chapter, a book showing Rihoko
closes, and a young woman grins devilishly. She seems to know Yakushi
and Rihoko. She seems to be out to kill them both! 10 days later, Rihoko
and friends are enjoying violent collisuem matches (and seeing as she is a
tomboy, Tia is going crazy for the violence...). As a new match begins,
the assassin woman from chapter six appears in a match! Her name is
Aria, and she apparently isn't there for fun... As she begins her match
against a much larger and buff foe, she isn't the slightest bit nervous. The
match begins, and Aria seems to avoid attacks with much ease. Annoyed,
she says "This is becoming a nuisance. You are very pathetic. I'll end this
quickly for you...". As her large opponent swings his towering fists at her,
Aria disappears and reappears to the mans side, and back hands him into
the wall. Disobeying the rules, she ends up killing the man with a single
blow! As the autoritys come to arrest her, she stabs them all, knocks
them unconscious, and disappears... What will follow Rihoko and the group after this? To Be Continued...
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Umm... Well... You see, because Dark Mage is unofficial, it'll be some time before this'll get copied. I'm talking YEARS. I'm actually gonna release a revised edition when I'm an adult to bookstores around the globe. Part of my life plan! But, if you come over, I can show you the comic! But in the meantime, here's another update!
After Aria's attack on the authorities, she reappears behind Rihoko! After drugging him by injecting a toxin on her knife, she attempts to take Rihoko; but is stopped by Yakushi! Finally, Yakushi is about to show how he fights, and tells Tyler, Tia, and Luna to take Rihoko away out of the colisseum. Aria and Yakushi then are prepared to face off. Aria again uses her disappearing technique, but Yakushi slings his notched sword behind him to capture Aria's knife between the jagged edges. Flipping his sword downward, Aria's is disarmed, and Yakushi takes a swing, hoping to hit her unconscience, but suddenly, Aria has a short dagger chop out from the palm of her hand! Aria has full ability over the iron in her blood, and she can multiply it to form various iron tools t protrude from her body! Yakushi is caught off guard, and is stabbed THROUGH the chest by her blade, now continually growing to inflict more pain! As the chapter closes, you see Yakushi swing his sword, and then a splash of blood. As the next chapter begins, Rihoko awakes, and finds that he's at a camp fire with a bandage wrapped around his bloody arm. He also notices that Yakushi is injured severly, but Yakushi keeps a straight face. Rihoko asks what happened, and Yakushi says that Aria tried to kill them, because Rihoko is the Dark Mage. Angry, Rihoko yells t Yakushi, questioning what and why there's a Dark Mage. And why he's been chosen. Rihoko discoveres what the Dark MAge is meant to do. Fend off evil. But by taking the approach of using darkness, evil can be banished in a different, more effectient perspective. Rihoko then learns of the oncoming threat of Hisayuki, and that Chris works with Hisayuki. Rihoko then fully understands what the Dark Mage is, and what he must do. But Yakushi remains silent when Rihoko asks why he's the new Dark Mage... Rihoko then learns that the Water Dragon from before was merely a test to see Rihoko's skill. Yakushi tells how Rihoko was ok with his timing and techniques, but what caused him to lose was his inability to harness his Dark Magick. So the groups set out on a quest to find three shrines: The Shrine of Light, The Temple of Darkness, and the Clocktower of Twilight. By studying the runes inside, Rihoko will fully understand what the Dark Mage is beyond what Yakushi knows, he'll know how to harness the power of darkness, and he'll better understand Hisayuki's goal. The problem is, is that the shrines lay dormant in the Land of Foreshadows, which is first of all, only possible to get to by being a trained Dark Mage, and is unexplored and filled with demons and beasts that control every corner of the land. Rihoko then must set out to find the missing members of th group in order to combine strenght to enter the Land of Foreshadows... What will befall them all? To be continued...
After Aria's attack on the authorities, she reappears behind Rihoko! After drugging him by injecting a toxin on her knife, she attempts to take Rihoko; but is stopped by Yakushi! Finally, Yakushi is about to show how he fights, and tells Tyler, Tia, and Luna to take Rihoko away out of the colisseum. Aria and Yakushi then are prepared to face off. Aria again uses her disappearing technique, but Yakushi slings his notched sword behind him to capture Aria's knife between the jagged edges. Flipping his sword downward, Aria's is disarmed, and Yakushi takes a swing, hoping to hit her unconscience, but suddenly, Aria has a short dagger chop out from the palm of her hand! Aria has full ability over the iron in her blood, and she can multiply it to form various iron tools t protrude from her body! Yakushi is caught off guard, and is stabbed THROUGH the chest by her blade, now continually growing to inflict more pain! As the chapter closes, you see Yakushi swing his sword, and then a splash of blood. As the next chapter begins, Rihoko awakes, and finds that he's at a camp fire with a bandage wrapped around his bloody arm. He also notices that Yakushi is injured severly, but Yakushi keeps a straight face. Rihoko asks what happened, and Yakushi says that Aria tried to kill them, because Rihoko is the Dark Mage. Angry, Rihoko yells t Yakushi, questioning what and why there's a Dark Mage. And why he's been chosen. Rihoko discoveres what the Dark MAge is meant to do. Fend off evil. But by taking the approach of using darkness, evil can be banished in a different, more effectient perspective. Rihoko then learns of the oncoming threat of Hisayuki, and that Chris works with Hisayuki. Rihoko then fully understands what the Dark Mage is, and what he must do. But Yakushi remains silent when Rihoko asks why he's the new Dark Mage... Rihoko then learns that the Water Dragon from before was merely a test to see Rihoko's skill. Yakushi tells how Rihoko was ok with his timing and techniques, but what caused him to lose was his inability to harness his Dark Magick. So the groups set out on a quest to find three shrines: The Shrine of Light, The Temple of Darkness, and the Clocktower of Twilight. By studying the runes inside, Rihoko will fully understand what the Dark Mage is beyond what Yakushi knows, he'll know how to harness the power of darkness, and he'll better understand Hisayuki's goal. The problem is, is that the shrines lay dormant in the Land of Foreshadows, which is first of all, only possible to get to by being a trained Dark Mage, and is unexplored and filled with demons and beasts that control every corner of the land. Rihoko then must set out to find the missing members of th group in order to combine strenght to enter the Land of Foreshadows... What will befall them all? To be continued...
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Here is concept art I made on paint. It shows Rihoko, and his most used sword, Twilit Blade. It looks horrible though...
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thatll look better when itz released world-wide, so dont worry. VERY good for paint, Though
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Why are you using -ness at the end of your words? that be my thing. and i actually DID make that up. unlike you and awesomesauce.....
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O RLY?!?!?!?!?! by the way, u forgot Lucky Star at the top. (in the first post) *looks at u with puppy-dog eyes in hope u will edit it*
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YA RLY!!!! And by the way, I've already designed the attire for Rihoko for Dark Mage 2. Yes, there's gonna be a sequel. I already planned out the whole basic story of Dark Mage 1, and I'm now drawing it and adding details to the story's basic idea. I know how it'll end, what the basic plot of Dark Mage 2 will be, and everything! There might even be a Dark Mage 3, which may follow the chronicles of Rihoko's son! *hint* *hint*
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If you invite me over, I can bring Dark Mage with me. It's not the best comic though...
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